Use internal monologue effectively from "summary" of Self-Editing for Fiction Writers, Second Edition by Renni Browne,Dave King
One of the most powerful tools at a fiction writer's disposal is internal monologue. It allows readers to gain insight into a character's thoughts and emotions, providing a deeper understanding of their motivations and actions. However, it is important to use internal monologue effectively in order to avoid overwhelming or boring readers. One common mistake writers make is using too much internal monologue. While it can be tempting to delve into a character's thoughts at length, excessive internal monologue can slow down the pace of a story and interrupt the flow of action. Instead, internal monologue should be used strategically, focusing on key moments where insight into a character's mind is essential. Another pitfall to avoid is using internal monologue as a crutch for exposition. While it can be a useful tool for revealing a character's backstory or motivations, internal monologue should not be relied upon to convey information that can be shown through action or dialogue. Instead, internal monologue should enhance the reader's understanding of...
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